Opened 6 years ago

Closed 6 years ago

Last modified 5 years ago

#14221 closed (fixed)

Mashed Sentences in Doc

Reported by: Grant <renderbox@…> Owned by: Derek Willis
Component: Documentation Version: 1.2
Severity: Keywords:
Cc: Triage Stage: Ready for checkin
Has patch: yes Needs documentation: no
Needs tests: no Patch needs improvement: no
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Description

http://docs.djangoproject.com/en/1.2/ref/contrib/gis/tutorial/

The introduction section says this:

"This tutorial is going to guide you through guide the user through the creation of a geographic web application for viewing the world borders. [1] Some of the code used in this tutorial is taken from and/or inspired by the GeoDjango basic apps project. [2]"

Looks like the start of two sentences in one. :) Probably should be something like this:

"This tutorial is going to guide you through the creation of a geographic web application for viewing the world borders. [1] Some of the code used in this tutorial is taken from and/or inspired by the GeoDjango basic apps project. [2]"

Grant

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14221.patch (1.2 KB) - added by Derek Willis 6 years ago.

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Change History (8)

comment:1 Changed 6 years ago by anonymous

Needs documentation: unset
Needs tests: unset
Owner: changed from nobody to anonymous
Patch needs improvement: unset
Status: newassigned
Triage Stage: UnreviewedAccepted

comment:2 Changed 6 years ago by Derek Willis

Owner: changed from anonymous to Derek Willis
Status: assignednew

Changed 6 years ago by Derek Willis

Attachment: 14221.patch added

comment:3 Changed 6 years ago by Derek Willis

Component: UncategorizedDocumentation
Has patch: set
milestone: 1.3
Triage Stage: AcceptedReady for checkin

comment:4 Changed 6 years ago by Derek Willis

Status: newassigned

comment:5 Changed 6 years ago by Russell Keith-Magee

Resolution: fixed
Status: assignedclosed

(In [14006]) Fixed #14221 -- Cleaned up some text in the GIS tutorial. Thanks to Grant <renderbox@…> for the report.

comment:6 Changed 6 years ago by Russell Keith-Magee

(In [14009]) [1.2.X] Fixed #14221 -- Cleaned up some text in the GIS tutorial. Thanks to Grant <renderbox@…> for the report.

Backport of r14006 from trunk.

comment:7 Changed 5 years ago by Jacob

milestone: 1.3

Milestone 1.3 deleted

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