Ticket #16661: 16661.patch

docs/topics/db/models.txt

@@ -363 +363 @@
 :class:`~django.db.models.ManyToManyField` (``toppings`` in the example above)
 be a plural describing the set of related model objects.
 
-It doesn't matter which model gets the
-:class:`~django.db.models.ManyToManyField`, but you only need it in one of the
-models -- not in both.
+You only need the :class:`~django.db.models.ManyToManyField` in one of the
+models, not in both. It doesn't matter which one.
 
 Generally, :class:`~django.db.models.ManyToManyField` instances should go in the
 object that's going to be edited in the admin interface, if you're using