Changes between Version 4 and Version 5 of VersionOneFeatures

Timestamp:

Nov 9, 2005, 9:16:21 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Adrian Holovaty

Comment:

Grammar fixes

VersionOneFeatures

@@ -1 +1 @@
 = Version 1.0 (?) feature list discussion =
 
-A place to vote on the features we're tossing around in [http://groups.google.com/group/django-developers/browse_thread/thread/5e629f571caec805/f2c0d8c85a2186b8#f2c0d8c85a2186b8 this django-developers thread].  Those who proposed features in the thread or those that explicitly agreed to them have already been added.  Features that are done or nearly done have been removed.
+This is the place to vote on the features we're tossing around in [http://groups.google.com/group/django-developers/browse_thread/thread/5e629f571caec805/f2c0d8c85a2186b8#f2c0d8c85a2186b8 this django-developers thread]. Those who proposed features in the thread, or those that explicitly agreed to them, have already been added. Features that are done or nearly done have been removed.
 
-Please add your name and vote in the Apache-style (+1/+0/-0/-1).  These votes are obviously not really binding in anyway; just a way to keep track of where we all stand on whether these features should be included in Django 1.0.
+Please add your name and vote in the Apache-style (+1/+0/-0/-1). These votes are obviously not really binding, anyway; they're just a way to keep track of where we all stand on whether these features should be included in Django 1.0.
 
-(Don't vote on weather or not you *want* the feature; just on weather it's should be included in a 1.0 release).
+(Don't vote on whether you *want* the feature; vote on whether it should be included in a 1.0 release).
 
 || '''Feature'''                      || '''Votes''' ||